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2005年专业四级英语作文真题:我对艺术节的看法

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:25浏览次数:3246
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题目 My idea of a university arts festival
说明 The students' Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅。

用户练习作文:

As a university student,I think we should gain our sight-view and improve our talent.So I hope we should a university arts festival. As far as I'm concerned,I think in the first place, we can make more friends by arts festival.In the second place,we can found the difference between China and forigen.Meanwhile,we can discovery our talent and interests. In a word,I think hold a university arts festival is a meaningful thing,and I hope we can find ourselves in the arts.

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