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As a university student,I think we should gain our sight-view and improve our talent.So I hope we should a university arts festival. As far as I'm concerned,I think in the first place, we can make more friends by arts festival.In the second place,we can found the difference between China and forigen.Meanwhile,we can discovery our talent and interests. In a word,I think hold a university arts festival is a meaningful thing,and I hope we can find ourselves in the arts.