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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1943
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

全文结构较为严谨;词汇表达用的较丰富,另外请检查文章的单词拼写;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。

用户练习作文:

nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious social problem.and it has increasingly become a common concern of the public.according to a survey,we know few university students have wasted foods spreadly. Wasty has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life,which has been articulated in the following aspects.It would be make our social worse.we all know our country has a large populations,if someone taste food ,i am sure other palce will shortage food,because the number of food is enough.Second,we all know food not just food,it cloud farmers tears and bloods,the plant become food is a long time.Finaly,our school food not donot need money,where our money from?our parents.Our parents make money is not easy. Based on the above discussions,i can easily forecast if we do like curent,all of us will face the situation that we will hungry.So i apppeal everyone no wastying.

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