语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。
Word came that advice on physical education reform for senior grade three were asked wide by PE teaching and research group,on the school’s net.I can’t agree with it more,due to the time-wasting and boring exercise,which limits students’all-side development as well as decrease their interest on sports. As is mentioned about the reform, there are two primary aspects---morning exercise and basic course required changing:The substitution of free walk may arouse students’,especially girls’enthusiasm.Not only does this personal trial allow students to achieve their own goals according to different individual health conditions,but also make them feel energetic and optimistic at the beginning of the day that will definitely improve on their listening efficiency and assignment quality;The replacement of traditional courses with minor courses including aerobics and shadowboxing, additionally,adds diversity to PE lessons so that students could stimulate their hobbies even cultivate their skills on movements. After my humble perspectives of the points,furthermore,I wonder whether the group could hold more sports activities or not. On the whole,it is truly an exciting news and that may be more pleasant if the plan will be carried out as soon as possible.