2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

文中衔接词丰富；句式变化较丰富，但文中有句子错误；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且要加强拼写检查；请注意分段。

when I was a children, sometimes my parents was hit me,the reasoning was I am a naughty boy.after the hiting that my parents could be communicated with me, they always told me, they are very love me, but they couldn't patiented of my laughty. so in my childhood I has been knowed the meant of carrot and stick.right now i am middle aged, when i review the passed of things,especially my parents hited me. i don's feeling it was a wrong