2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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It's important for us to great a green campus.The green campus not only refers to green environment but also refers to the quality of students,the atmosphere of reading. So, how the school's students are depend on this school weather is green campus or not. In order to make us can learn more knowledge and live in more beautiful environment,everybody of us should take part in great green campus.First of all,we should not throw garbage anywhere,because the garbage will polluting campus environment.The following, we should study hard,because the knowledge can enrich our brain,then makes us more smart.Third,we should dress up,don't wear strange clothes. A good school of environment is needed of our everyone's attempting, so let us contribute the campus.