2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,a lot of parents almost help their children to do all the thing.Take a look around,there are too many examples to list.In children's opinions,whether it is a kind of hapiness or not. As far as I am concerned,I never agree that it is good for both of them.Because it can make our parents too tired to keep a good health .What's more,the most important thing is that our children will lose their ability to survive in our competitive society.It's so dangerous! Parents should help their children to be independent.Fistly,parents should not help their children to do all the thing.Secondly,parents should encourage their children to do something that is full of risk.Finally,parents should set a good example to their children,which can persuade their children to be independent better.