2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Should parents send their kids to art classes? As far as we realized,it is clearly showing the common phenomenon that number of parents are thinking about the same conceptions of that they send ther kids to art classes,where they treat it as a better place. Aimng at this idea,there are totally different intention about the appearance.Someone properly support it for saying about the benifition on kids,which causing the popular situation in modern time.On cotrary,few people argue with the problem for talking about the interest to kids,which leaving the personally scene notion completed with ourselves. Nevertheless,in my view of my eyes,one coin has two sides.With the development of our society,we surely need to improve our kids' capablation,but it is supposed to have a boundard for kids.Besides,kids need to enjoy their own time whichi owns to them.However,the most esstainal things we ought to do is that we should take an right action to combine art classes with playing fun.Only in this way,we can not only help our kids study more and make progresses frequently,but also have a good time for their child time,which impress on their remembering of head.