湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

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Nowadays，with the rapid developed of society，moer and msomeoer people like to purchase online ， purchase online become moer and moer popular To this issue different people have different attitude，most people think that shopping online is a convenient way of shopping，people can buy they need a thing at any time，what is moer ，the things online is cheaper than reality store ，that can save money。but some of people think purchase online is a not safe way。 In my opinion，I support the one view，because I like purcheas online，It can save money and can buy good things what I need。