新东方托福高分作文:成功源于必要的风险还是周密的计划?

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In recent days, more and more people are concerned the problem about how can we achieve the success. Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances, and others believe that success results from careful planning. As to me, my opinion is careful planning and chances help each other, let us closer with success. To bolster my stance, I will talk about the point as following. First of all, it is inevitable that chances is associated with riskes. For example, a person who quit his job, and go out to start a business, say something nice this is entrepreneurship. The risks of he is faced with no stabie salary and venture may fail. But at the time, he once is successful, it will not be estimated the satisfaction and the wealth for success to us. Next, the careful planning let us have the higher chance to success. It can help us to avoid the potential riskes. And careful planning is to think all aspects of things, never fight without preparation. In summarize, the chance means opportunity, and the opportunity is to whether become the start of success is to see whether we have a careful planning. So, careful planning, chances and success is closely.