参考词汇:资源natural resource;节约型社会an energy-saving society
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
As we know, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away. They are still useful. What a great waste it is! I suggest that we should recycle these books. On one hand, they can be used again and again, recycling them can save a lot of natural resources. On the other hand, junior students may have made plenty of useful notes on the pages. They are very helpful to the following users. In fact, in Australia and some other countries, recycling textbooks is popular, which gives us a good example. It can help many poor village students to continue their study. At present, the whole nation is called on to build an energy-saving society. I hope more and more students can join me and do something for it.