2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；全文结构较为严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

Everyday morning when I come to the office, firstly I turn on the computer and start to work. Everyday afternoon, when I come to my dorm, firstly I turn on my private computer. In a word, the computer becomes a part of my life. Because everyday I spend about 16 hours on the computer. I think there are so many people the same like me. The computer becomes a part of men 's life. If you are an officer, the computer is a tool which let your work be convenient, even maybe you are good at the computer skills so that you can be promoted to high position or given high salary. If you are an student, you can use computer to complete your thesis and search more information for your study. Also you can use computer to entertain yourself at your spare time. In a word, The computer has already been so close to man.