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The importance of keeping a good mood As we all know, man is a creature who has thought, emotion and mood. We all know this word," Smile and you will be younger 10 years." Maybe you think is just a book-word, but keeping a good mood is imperative to everyone. If you keeping a good mood, you will have a positive attitude to everything. Bad mood will influence your attitude when you want to do something, and in this condition,you will not abtain a good achievement. But in comparise, if you keeping a good mood you will have a most part of percent to success. If you keeping a good mood, you will make many friends. Every one likes people who loves smile, because they think such a kind of man are easy-going. If you keeping a good mood, you will find everything surrounded you are beautiful. Some elder people likes said," A man will have good fortunte who likes smile and probably success on some aspects." So, there are lots of things that cannot satisfied you in the world, rather sad than keeping a good mood.