Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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hollow everyone.now,maybe i can talk with you about Education pays. look, this picture.unemploy rate in 2011,the less then high school diploma is14.1%,but only need 451$,the high school diploma is 9.4%,but is need 638$.increase a litte something and the some college, no degree is 8.7%,then it is need to 719$ and associate degree is need 768$ which have 6.8%.the bachelor's degree,the mater's degree ,the professional degree and doctoral degree,part of 4.9%,3.6%,2.4%,2.5%and spend some money part of 1053$,1263$,1655$,1551$.