2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays,a lot of parents almost help their children to do all the thing.Take a look around,there are too many examples to list.What do you think of this sutiation? As far as I am concerned,I never agree that it is good for both of them.It's obvious that our parents will feel so tired,which can't keep healthy.What's more,the most important thing is that our children will lose their ability to survive in our competitive society.It's so dangerous! Parents should help their children to be independent.Fistly,parents should not help their children to do all the thing.Secondly,parents should encourage their children to do something that is full of risk.Finally,parents should set a good example to their children,which can persuade their children to be independent better.