题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Nowadays,many people could'nt trust each other.Why does this situiations happend, and what can we do to keep trust each other? This is a question. To solve this problem, Many people have different opionins. Some people think that we should communicate with others, for this, we can know what other people thought. And some people think that we should