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Goup buying As shopping online is becoming more and more popular, many people are willing to buy anything online. More and more online shops serve all kinds of coupons to attract customs. Personally, I think this kind of sell is good from the perspect of customs. I prefer to choose group-buy ways because I think it will be more cheaper than usual. In addition, this way makes me feel secure since a great number of people buy the same thing as me. Also, the coupons always make up feel happy . We may delight that we can buy much cheaper things through coupons. This is what other all think. Maybe it has some disadvantages, but I would rather buy things with coupons or just join group-buying.
