2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中用词稍显贫乏，请多使用学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays,the technology is becoming more and more fashion.So many and many people start to playing the computer to catch up with the speed of the world's develoption. In the beginning,people don't know what computer is and have no idea how the computer use.with the development of the technology,anyone can play it and use it well. Computer can do many things that people can't do.For example,computer can do dangerous works and do much help to people. So now computer plays an important role in our daily life.