2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As we all know,how to deal with the childen's problems are important to this situation. Many parents do evertying for their children in the present days. As for me,i think that parents shouldn't do that. On my opions, we should encourage children to do things independently. So parents can do this. Let them do what them want .Such as go shopping with friend 、travel on one's own and so on.Don't love childen so deeply. parents shouldn't wash clothes for them or should encourage them to wash by themselves.We should let them have a better habies like this to lead them independence.