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i think keeping a good mood is neccesry,which is no doubt influence our daily life.when i was mad or worried about someting unhapp,i can't concentrate on my study,and i was upset,didn't want study anymore.later,i find the importance of keeping a good mood,when i became unhappied,i played games insteads of doing my homewoke,when my mood became ok,i continue did what i had finished.
