2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As we all know,how to deal with the children problems are important to this situation.Many parents do everything for their children in the present days. As for me,I think that parents shouldn't do that.On my opions,We should encourage children to do things independently.So parents can do this.Let them do what them want .Such as go shopping with friends.Travel on one's own and so on.Don't love children so deeply. Parents shouldn't wash clothes for them or should encourage them to wash by themselves.We should let them have a better hobbies like this to lead them independence.