2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Nowadays,a lot of parents almost help their children to do all the thing.Take a look around,there are too many examples to list. As far as I am concerned,I never agree that it is good for both of them.It's obvious that our parents will feel so tired,which can't keep healthy.What's more,the most important thing is that our children will lose their ability to survive in our competitive society.It's so dangerous! Parents should help their children to be independent.Fistly,parents should not help their children to do all the thing.Secondly,parents should encourage their children to do something that is full of risk.Finally,parents should set a good example to their children,which can persuade their children to be independent better.