2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，不过文中词汇表达贫乏；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；连词使用偏少。

.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement 2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details 3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 字数：200满分：100分.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement 2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details 3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 字数：200满分：100分