2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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Communication barriers has become a hot topic among people,especially,among young man and heated debates are right on their way.The children are willing to communicate with their teachers,in that the teacher frequently with a serious expression and in a harsh tone them,they prefer to communicate to their friends. parents that often reprimand or abuse instead of understand and encourage them,gradually,they had become an fair mind then communication barriers.