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Now,shopping on computer is very fashion .many young is regard it as a main way in shopping.everything has two coins.it is not a exception. on the one hand ,on online shopping has some advantage.it is cheaper than store sometimes,we can buy something only use our figure. but on the other hand ,it is disadvantage.we can not see the true before we buy it,or we can get our goods slower. it is no doult that i like shopping too.so in my opinion ,on online shopping is good,if you never want to buy bad goods at all. you can see the attitude of others before you buy it.all in all,you should think it carefully not only you buy online but you buy in store.
