2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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here comes the sheet of the data which is about education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates as you can see from the data .it shows that people with higer eduction earn more than those who with lower education.and the higer eduction you have the lower rate of unemployment you are.and diferent degrees have diferent influences.what makes those happened? in my oppinion ,those who with high degree may have some advantages rather than their degree . maybe they are efficient faithful and kown exactly what they really want to do or they have their own plan about the work and life.they earn those advantages even when they were students .i think this is the value of the aducation,not only about degrees but also about good habits .