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With the booming of economic development, television, is exposed to every householders becoming the reality. Therefore, as far as i’m concerned, advertising on television has lots of advantages, such as, having a large number of clients and easily spreading out information. On the one hand, television has been prevailing, there are lots of people watching TV, like kids, older-men, teens and adults. Each of them is potentially clints who watch the ads on television and buy goods. On the other hand, because of kinds of watchers, information is easy to spread out on TV. That means the ads putting on TV would save money on target marketing. For example, if a company wants to advertise their products, they choose to use stuff advertising. However, it will cost a lot of money and time but useless because advertisement on the products can’t spread to everyone users who want to buy them. In conclusion, advertising on television is useful and effective. In this way, advertising will get good responds.
