小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my good friend's name is Lily, she has a long black hair,a pair of black eyes, small mouth and skilled hands. red is her favouriate colour, she always wears the light red skirt and red shoes. she has good characteristics, good patience and good memory. she is good at studying and helping persons who are bad at studying. she always helps me too. I like her very much.