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有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误。
The idea and the practice that college students in China should hire cleaners to keep their dorms clean are just an extension of such notorious dotage and spoiling and, as such, constitute an unmistakable indication of our education being truly sick and decadent. Those who advocate and support the contention maintain that, as Chinese families get materially better-off in recent years, college students have the implicit freedom to spend their money on whatecer they desire and hire cleaners to keep their dorms clean can help students save time, which they presumably can spend on their studies. Howecer, such a chain of reasoning of seriously flawed. This naturally leads to a serious question regarding the ultimatte aim of our education. No one denies the importance of learning but acquiring learing is only part of the college education. Essentially, college education is about the development of a whole person, who an apply the knowledge and the skills in diverse intellectual soheres to cope with the challenges ahead and turn one into a person instrumental to our society. In a word, we had better do cleaning with our own hands because it only takes a little part of our time and we can easily be good at study at the same time as long as we arrange our time efficiectly and make full use of it.
可可英语 - 划词释义
