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April 19th, 2014 Lily, I heard that you are looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. I have seen an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy. Since you are good at English and like teaching, I think this job is very suitable for you, because it not only helps you earn money but also practices yourself. So please think about it. Kay