1997年专四作文真题:Does More pressure good to us

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With the development of society,we enjoy the benefit of modern society as well as we are facing the pressure that the modern society brings There are more and more competition in our life ,such as study and work.Some people may figure that pressure does goood to our life and it can contribute us to keep on going.