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How time flies,i am on the threshold of graduation.It's time to look back my four years' campus life and to have a reflection on my most precious years.I firmly believe that college years have prepared me well for my future life,for i have gained a lot physically and psychologically,Which will exert a positive infulence on my future career. To begin with,most people maintain that college is a place for enhancing your future work abilities,because you can improve obersevation,enrich knowledge and learn methods .To be frank,i have spent most of my time studying in the library,reading various books ranging from arts ,fitcion and ducoments to science,physics and biology,which help me lay a solid fundation for my future life.What's more,different specialities i have gained will equip me with better work effifficies. What's more,myriads of professors and teachers in college have taught me a lot about how to become a better man .Their responsibilities,devotion and dedication all rolled into one thing,that is ,their deep love to the course and us student.It is from them that i begin to understand how great the sence of responsibility is not only for being a good individual but being a better work stuff. Last but not least,i also learn a lot of from my classmates who always be my best company when i feel sad and sorrowful.From them,i begin to taste sweet friendiship and mutual care.When i am in a tight corner,they will give me a hand and help me out.In my coming days,i will do my utmost to help those who are in need to ease the so-called complex working relationship. Thus,my four years campus life is colorful and rich,it is also full of ups and downs,i have experienced my best time here.From my personal prospective,i think it will be a treasury for my whole life ,for all the things i have learned will make me compent for my future life.
