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As my college life, filled with ups and sorrows ,colors and achievenments ,is drawing to an end ,I am on the threshold of graduation,it's to have a relection on my precious time during my whole life and a time to raise a question "what i have learned during my four years life in college?" To begin with,college to me is an ivory tower where i can improve observation ,enrich knowledge and learn methods.As to my professional course,i just followed the flow of curriculum,not lagging behind it nor excelling in it.All these major courses have really equipped me with different specialities which might be beneficial for my fture work.Beside reading and study shape my inclination and associating with diverse people makes me grow mature. Besides,myriads of professors and teachers have set us a good example about how to be a better man.Their responsibility,devotion and dadication have rolled into one thing,that is,their deep love to the course and us students.It is from them that i begin to think about how tough my parents' life might be and how significant the sense of responsibility is.I believe responsibility will exert a great influence on my future career. Last but not least,my classmates and friends have also taught me a lot.When i am in a tight cornor,they will give me a hand and helpe me out.In the coming days,i will also do my utmost to help those who are in great need.What's more,i also know how to better handle interpersonal relationship which poses a big chanllenge to many fresh graduates.The conversations and communications i have had with them just make me more confident and skillful talk to different people. Thus ,it is natural to draw a conclusion about my campus life:I have gained a lot physically and psychologically during the past years and i have tasted the bitterness and sweetness of life.I believe all the things i have experienced will pave a better way for my future life.
