2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I like the computer and,I am a man! I just have a computer and I love him, I often clean him ,I like him.The computer can play the Game and listen to music ,I like watching the movies. The man can use the computer do many things, I can use the computer play the Games , and buy somethings.