2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,excessive packaging get more and more pupular around us.People tend to buy products which are packing excessively. The reason of this are fellowed.First also the most simple reason ,people may think they are beautiful.Second those products are fit for them to sent somebody as a present.Last but not the least,they always like having a good face.They do this to show they are rich or something. I think it is compietely wrong.We buy product itself not their packing.Those who buy excessive packaging product may waste their money to buy something useless.