the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是…
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。
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Notice Subject: Autumn Time:Desember 27 at 7:00am. Place:the school gate Participants: the first grade students According to the schedule,the touring will include visit the botanical garden and see "man and nature" Exhibition in the morning.Secondly,we can visit Summer Palace in the afternoon.So you're attention to bring lunch and Participants in this Thursday to student enrolment.three,you call leave your baggage in the left.Please be on time.