2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；部分学术词汇也能熟练使用，但文中有较多拼写错误。

with the rapdid developed of socity,an incresting number of people use the computer as new technology for offices .many kind of person choice it to connect with the foreigner, or seching some news,even trading with some one.the computer and man between more and more closed and inseparable. With the coming of Post-PC Time and the development of information, intelligence and Internet, there were some problem we should be noticed , most of them are too reliated with computer ,to make some troble .there are some reasons , first , people can just use computer to doing office's work rather than thier mind, maybe it is symble ,but not for your developed ,second , too much rely on it, it's harmful to improved our skill and ability . last but not least ,the people would become lazier and lazier .but we do not negative there are some advantage . like the time saving, more facility,and improved your efficiency. As far as i am concerned,we should deal better with compueter and man ,employ the computer appropriately is good for us .