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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨;部分学术词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误。

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With the rapdid developed of socity,an incresting number of people use the computer as new technology for offices.many kind of person choose it to connect with the foreigners,or seching some news even trading with some one.The computer and man between more and more closed and inseparable. With the coming of Post-PC Time and the development of information, intelligence and Internet, there were some problem show up,most of them are too reliated with computer to make some troble .There are some reasons,first,people can just use computer to doing office's work rather than thier mind, maybe it is symble,but not for your developed.Second ,too much rely on it,it's harmful to improved our skill and ability . Last but not least,the people would become lazier and lazier.In the other hand we do not negative there are some advantage.such as the time saving,more facility and improved your efficiency. As far as i am concerned,we should deal better with compueter and man ,employ the computer appropriately is good for us .

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