2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分学术词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

With the rapdid developed of society,an increasing number of people use the computer as a new invention.Many people choose it to connect with the foreigners,or serching some news even trading with some one.The computer and man between more and more closed and inseparable. With the coming of Post-PC Time and the development of information, intelligence and Internet, there were some problem show up,most of them are too related with computer to make some trouble .There are some reasons,first,people can just use computer to doing office's work rather than thieir mind, maybe it is symbol,but not for your developed.Second ,too much rely on it,it's harmful to improve our skill and ability . Last but not least,the people would become lazier and lazier.On the other hand, we do not negative there are some advantage.for example, the more time would be saving,the more facility and efficiency would be obtained. As far as i am concerned,we should deal better with compueter and man ,employ the computer appropriately is good for us .