英语三级B卷作文模拟附范文:拟通知

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Notice A visit has been arranged to the Nanlin Farm of Qinglong Country on June 20th, 2010. The itinerary includes: At 8:30 a.m. The farm office, a brief introduction to the farm by the general manager At 9:30 a.m. A visit to the farm and enjoy the natural view At 10:30 a.m. Visit the farm-run factory At 11:30 a.m. Going to Farmers’ homes in for a visit Those who want to go are expected to gather in front of the library at 6:30. The bus will leave at 6:40 a. m.