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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. Now,the first of all,my opinion is we can save money,and do plan about use money. Then,I will tell you about the reason,my family is poor,but my mather is smart who is able to use a litter of money achieve our demange about food.so we often feel happy,as if we were rich,we should't be anxious. Fanilly,the conclution,the money like water in the sponge, the more save the more a lot.
