使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉。
When we talk about the name of us, someone think it's very important for everyone, because the name will accompany with us forever, if we have a good name, it will help us have a good impression to others, one the countrary , someone else think it has a little point for us, they think the name just like a marks, there is not important for us. whatever, everyone has different point. As for me, i think the name has a great importance for everyone. At first,the name stands for us. we always introduce ourselves to others by telling our name first. Second, if you have a good name it can be remembered quickly by others, it will help you know each other. Last but not least, if you have a good name, it has a good symble for you. In a word, having a good name is neccersry for everyone.