作者能较灵活地使用学术词汇,要仔细避免拼写错误;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
The Celebration of Western Festival What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the poular phenomenon that a variety of persons are preciously celebrate western festival in our country,which has been contiuned for many years,including Chrismas as well as Rose Day. There are proerly different reasons presenting on us.At first,cultural difference leads to the distrinct conception,nevertheless,we has been absorbed in western festival with developing of our society.In additon to it,a classical idea says that one world,one dream.Therefore,they clearly hold the attitude that we ought to learn western festival.Apart from it,the celebration of western festival is a esstainal theme to chat with others,causing that we can gain our knowledge of foriegn culture. But,surly enough,just an old Areb proverb says,every sword has it two edges.it also has disadvantages which probably affect us.For example to cite,they are excessivly addicted to celebrate western festival,resulting in forgetting to remember traditional festival.Besides,number of persons are crazy about western festival that will relate to safety. Thus,generally speakiing,it is high time that we placed great emphasis on this issue.That is to say ,further attention is to be paid to this issue.We are supposed to celebrate western festival in proper.Only through effective actions that has been taken can we prevent this trend of celebrating western festival.
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