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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
In daily life ,the price of the clothes or other materials is increasing ,but the income does not have same change .So more and more people ,especialy women consumers ,who explore a better way to save money .they collect all kinds of coupons for buying .This is a good choice for sales ,but for buyers ,this is not a perfect way . For college students ,they do not have job to make monet ,so they always collect kings of coupons to buy some needs.The quality of the products can not receive complete safe protect.For our mother ,they often deal with households,so they are always considerable .The cheap price is definetely a lure to them.So it is same to students . Spending money to point is a good choice .We should have clear eyes to recognize the reality in the sales .Becoming a inteligent consumer is a social class we should learn .
