2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；熟练使用了一些长难句。

Nowadays have witnessed a commonly phenomenon that parents arrange all the issues for children,and it's obvious that parents' excessive care do harm to kids' independence. It's no denying that effective action should be taken to lower negative affects,which can be elaborated as follow.Firstly,parents can demand kids to do some part-time jobs to earn a part of their schooling so that kids can get some social experiences,which is of benefit to their future .Besides,parents should give some rights to children to chose their own life,otherwise,kids will loose their own thinking and be disable to deal with problems independently.Last but not least,parents can ask children about their opinion on some passages,news and so on. From what had mentioned above,the phenomenon should seriously concern us.All of all,parents should take some action while kids also should pay efforts.