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新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:34浏览次数:1088
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【题目要求

Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

【题目分析

选择哪一个都无所谓,列出三个理由。不要忘了提及另外一种选择也有一些好处。也可以说不同的情况下可以做出不同的选择。
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用户练习作文:

If ask me to make a choice between work for big company and small company, I prefer the big one. First, big company can provide more chances than small company. Working in big company would easier to get chance to build connection with successful people. Second, most big companies can provide good training to their employees. this definitely would add the value on personal working experience. Third, big company's benefit is better than small company. They can provide competitite salary, health insurance, good retire plan.

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