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Recently, the problem of excessive packaging has been brought into public focus. When you go to shopping ,you may notice this phenomenon that more and more people are fond to buy luxious goods, in addition to require beautiful packaging. Should we use excessive packing, that's a question. There are various reasons responsible for this embrassing situation. For one thing,some people thing the high quality is associated with goods.Moreover,they attach important to purchase excessive packing goods.For another, those who want to resprent status, they spend more money on gifts. That is to say, they want to reap the benefit from ohers. From my perspect , it's essential that effective measures must be taken to cope this problem. On the one hand, weshould pay attention to environment problem.Package is not easy decay , it's cause to pollute. On the other hand,current development should in accordiance with economy.Excessive packaging not only waste money but also detory the environment .In conclusion it's necessary to strengthen the ties between economy and environment.
