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As everything has both sides, eating in home has a lot of positives, but the downsides still exist. First of all, eating in home can save money. cooking by ourselves is much cheaper than restaurant. In restaurant, people usually need to pay at least 10% of total as tips. However, eating in home, no need to pay this part of money. In addition, eating in home allows people get more time with family members. People can get more family parties chances which can let family stay closely than before. However, eating in restaurant can save a lot of time. People no need spend time on shopping, preparing, and cleaning. All they need to do is walk in the restaurant to enjoy the delicious food. They can use the saving time to relax or do what they want. I think people can eat in home during weekdays. During the weekend, they can go to some famous restaurant to enjoy.
