2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

It is believed that the computer can do almost every thing. At the time the computer was invented, scientists carried away by its calculating speed, felt that they had created a miracle. It was gradually used not only in mathematics, physics, chemistry and astronomy, but in other places like the library, hospital and military army to replace the work of man. For the work of man. For this reason, the computer was entitled “Electronic Brain” in terms of appreciation. Can man be controlled by computers? The answer is negative. Although a computer works much faster and accurately than man , a fact is undeniable; it is designed, manufactured and programmed by man, by human beings. Of course, science fictions have made up of many fascinating stories about a computer, or a robot, who conquers man and the earth, even the whole universe. However, they are only unrealistic imagination. A horse helps man a lot which runs much faster than us, but it is only a slave. The future of the computer is very promising. With the help of it, we can do things that could not be done before. Conquering the universe, discovering new things, explaining mysteruiys phenomena which puzzling us at present are all made possible by computer.