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The Ways of saving Money There are different ways among people as to saving money day-to-day.Some people suggest we should not buy clothes in the sale,we should not buy useless decorations,such as ,dolls.While other people believe that we are not supposed to buy what we can not afford restrictly.In my opinion,I think we should save money buy