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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33548
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分28.5分
评语:

文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;简单句比重稍微偏高,文中有句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

The Ways of saving Money There are different ways among people as to saving money day-to-day.Some people suggest we should not buy clothes in the sale,we should not buy useless decorations,such as ,dolls.While other people believe that we are not supposed to buy what we can not afford restrictly.In my opinion,I think we should save money buy

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