高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometwom was a beatiful village.there were many trees and streets.Besides,a lot of clear rivers which were beatiful fish in here.the people lived in poor life,but they were happy very day. Today a lot of change have taken.Many buildings have been set up,streets have been fulled with cars.With develpment of the industy,the environment is being worsly,and fish,forest has dispear.Now the first thing is solving the environment problem . I hope this problem can be solved aspossibel as government can.